Saturday, May 16, 2009

Once a Boy

Once a boy, always a boy.

A lapdog hung by string roots
shot by barbed wire
stretching; an unequivocal menace
in the killing fields. Fields that
boast of legacies that sneak
young boys with shrapnel,
it coaxes with chocolate-covered piety
and offers it to the Legacy of America.
(Once a boy, always a boy.)

Twice wounded, thrice glittered
by a (machine gun) that sparkled
sanguine stars on some mangled thing
of a body; enamored by the
sweet shrill of the rifles
humming some new upbeat single.

The boys wound round—wind-up dolls
in a frisky unorthodox tango,
as if on a showcase being judged by
Big Brother, on a scale from one to ten,
despite letters addressing their
lonely gals back at home,
unsure of which direction their
feet are forced to run;
courage strength be-a-hero,
America!
is their surrogate lover,
that is, if not already flirting with the
smokin’ mine bombs,
sizzlin’ blood on a half-faced man,
steamin’ missiles defecated by planes,
rumor has it.

2 comments:

Ace is... said...

hrm, im not too sure if my interpretation of the poem is right. I had to read it twice to get a feel of what i think is going on.

i read it as a poem where i pictured young innocent youthful "boys" that didn't know what to do in their life. They just follow. You give many words that point to Uncle Sam and the government. like references to america, ang big brother.

I think what's going on is that these young boys follow whole heartedly without a second thought. they follow the government of America blindly with a full force of nationalism just because they were born on this very soil. you say things like legacy of america and being a lapdog hung by barbed wire reminds me of a US army soldier. i thought of a army puppet doll held by barbed wire being controlled.

I think you are also pointing out the pros and cons of war. whether it's worth it or not to sacrifice yourself for your country. like how you relate riffles and a song making a new upbeat single and smoking mine bombs, and deafecated planes. you also put uncertainty, how these boys are forced to run where they do not know where to go.

you put rumor has it at the end. is that like a disclaimer saying "i havent' expereicned war, but this is my interpretation of war.

I am confused, but i think that's my interpretation of what's going on. lol i have no idea if i am right or completely wrong.

hehe

---Ace

Justin said...

I like the juxtaposition of the chocolate metaphor.

It's an interesting anti-war poem it seems to me. It rings of difference feminism in that it gives the idea that males are predisposed to war and violence.

Some of the metaphors I don't quite understand like the "string roots" (though, thinking about it, is that supposed to be a dead body on barbed wire?) also the inclusion of "Big Brother" seems arbitrary.

But I like it. It's interesting.